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frice2000 · 01-17-2013

Interesting start. Perhaps could have used a little more descriptions on your characters and a few more personality traits. But overall was pretty interesting. Thanks for sharing.

01-17-2013	#2
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: New Story: An Unexpected Evolution Interesting start. Perhaps could have used a little more descriptions on your characters and a few more personality traits. But overall was pretty interesting. Thanks for sharing.