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Originally Posted by hexen
I like it, quite to the point... although a tyrant will never have a thriving kingdom if he or she keeps turning their productive citizens into cattle... but I can see Quen Moonwoe's point of view, she can be convincing. I am seriously looking forward for the massive crossover you set your stories into.
Also, as far as I got it the gryphon is more of a dragon/lion mix instead of the usual lion/eagle? Couldn't quite get much of the creature's look.
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Glad you liked it. Ya know, I'd never considered the implications to a population being subjected to regular TF's. I suppose it may
indeed hurt productivity a bit. lol
Sorry about the lack of detail on the griffin. This one's more of a wolf-dragon hybrid. Probably should have tried to highlight that in greater detail.
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Originally Posted by frice2000
I guess it's because while the transformation does interest me, hence you know member on this forum, I also really like reading about characters dealing with the post transformation. There's so much to that too. And each of your stories since you change them mentally sometimes, or sometimes not at all mentally there seems to be a rather big story to having to deal with their new forms. Lots could be told from that perspective.
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I see your point. I've just never really had the incentive to delve into the victims mind post-TF, generally because it never really furthers my plots. I DO try to give hints, however, through body language (such as a resigned sigh, a baleful glare, ect). Maybe I'll give it a try the next time around.
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Originally Posted by TF-Viewer
That was hot.
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Thanks. My main goal is to delight!