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Mr Wayne · 01-22-2013

Wussy,

From this part of page 110, "Her stomach growled. The sleeves of her shirt suddenly seemed tighter around her arms.", how descriptive is the growth/process scene in which she has been described as growing out of her clothes? I'm assuming it is less than 19 pages from the second excerpt you provided, but was wondering how detailed it might be. Taking into consideration that it is a children's book, I know not to expect anything sexually graphic, but there may still be some good process moments. B-)

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Mr Wayne The Man~the Myth~the Bat Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Gotham Posts: 738	Re: The Giant Garden Of Oz Wussy, From this part of page 110, "Her stomach growled. The sleeves of her shirt suddenly seemed tighter around her arms.", how descriptive is the growth/process scene in which she has been described as growing out of her clothes? I'm assuming it is less than 19 pages from the second excerpt you provided, but was wondering how detailed it might be. Taking into consideration that it is a children's book, I know not to expect anything sexually graphic, but there may still be some good process moments. B-) __________________ The night is darkest just before the dawn... kArMa XD Last edited by Mr Wayne; 01-22-2013 at 06:00 PM. Reason: Oops