Hi everyone.
I'm new around here, and I've just written and uploaded my first story attempt here:
http://www.overflowingbra.com/results.htm?varname=817
I know it's very short, but it was just an attempt at the whole thing to see if I was any good at it! Any feedback would be great, I'm currently considering what to do next if people like it then I might expand on this base or maybe do something completely different.
I hope you like it!