Thanks for coming back to this story; I'm sorry that I didn't catch your last message about needing help, or I'd have given you some ideas earlier.
If I had to describe this chapter, I'd say that it's all about emotion. Very powerful, amplified by all the wolf pack bond stuff, and - as with the previous chapters - it's presented in a stream-of-consciousness style that makes it easy to get inside the heads of the characters and almost feel it yourself.
The impending introduction of new werewolf characters (or are they...?
) is welcome, but I'm curious as to how this will tie in with the beginning of the story - the shewolf bodysuit. If you need a hand with writer's block, drop me a PM and I'll see what I can think up...