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Unread 03-28-2013   #6
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Re: A Work in Progress

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Originally Posted by Kantomaster1111 View Post
"Transforming Under Pressure" could work. Or simply "Under Pressure." Maybe even "The Heat is On."

And some criticism: try, if you can, to play with the lighting to make it look more like sunset. It just looks like late afternoon. Unless of course that is your intention.

I'm intrigued! Can't wait to see more. Hopefully it will explained how the friend came to be bitten. Did Amy bite her?
It actually is supposed to look like late afternoon as sunset is still around two hours away. I am tracking moon phases for this story and have a reference date and location for that purpose. I even made sure that the clocks that appear in the comic show the correct time for the story.

This does tell me that maybe I should put a dialog mention about moonrise vs. sunset back in the comic.


The answer to your second question is "it's complicated". Indeed, I could devote a whole comic series to untangling that...
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