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Expansionist · 03-03-2007

Just finished reading it.

I really enjoyed it, despite myself. I usually try and avoid applying fetishes like these to anime characters I like but this piece of fiction was really well done.

The writing quality is excellent, I have to say. It doesn't take much imagination to picture what's going on. The story simply flowed on and on perfectly smoothly, with no obvious pauses or loss of clarity. The characters are captured really well and are written convincingly enough to be the genuine article.

I have to admit, I rarely take the time to read fanfics but once I started this one I had to finish it. The length isn't completely overwhelming and as a whole is paced very well. As it starts it slowly builds to the climax of the story and delivers it with aplomb, meeting the high anticipation it builds up.

I have to say, if you write the other fics I will eagerly download and read those too. It would be a terrible loss if you didn't but it's your choice and I wouldn't hold any hostility. I appreciate you sharing this with us, thank you!

03-03-2007	#18
Expansionist Frequent Poster Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 320	Just finished reading it. I really enjoyed it, despite myself. I usually try and avoid applying fetishes like these to anime characters I like but this piece of fiction was really well done. The writing quality is excellent, I have to say. It doesn't take much imagination to picture what's going on. The story simply flowed on and on perfectly smoothly, with no obvious pauses or loss of clarity. The characters are captured really well and are written convincingly enough to be the genuine article. I have to admit, I rarely take the time to read fanfics but once I started this one I had to finish it. The length isn't completely overwhelming and as a whole is paced very well. As it starts it slowly builds to the climax of the story and delivers it with aplomb, meeting the high anticipation it builds up. I have to say, if you write the other fics I will eagerly download and read those too. It would be a terrible loss if you didn't but it's your choice and I wouldn't hold any hostility. I appreciate you sharing this with us, thank you!