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Unread 04-13-2013   #265
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Re: New TF Story

Just wanted to say I really enjoyed this story and would love for you to continue it. I really enjoyed how you developed the relationship between Mary and the The Body. With her having to come up with explanations, for not eating everything, that it can actually understand within its somewhat limited experiences. This story is one of the few I've found in the genre that is actually a story with conflict, characters and antagonists rather than a list of cool things happening to someone one after another. I would really love to see this continued as I feel it was just starting to reach a head after Mary's attack on the cops.

As a side note I was wondering how Mary, Sandra and Katie have gone so long without more contact from the cops or government since her attack seemed to be pretty high profile news.
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