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Re: The Mystery Box
Good story so far. It's plot, which is always great to have in a fetish story, is interesting on it's own to keep one reading. The transformations come up often too which is another plus.
Only ccritique I can say is more detailed during the process of the change, especially clothes bursting, would be nice, but then again that's just a personal kink of mine.
Otherwise keep the good stuff coming my dear.
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