It was great ! Really good work !
There was only a few things which bothered me.
Luke and Nicole relationship seemed to be that of long time lovers when they only met yesterday as far as the reader know. Being ok with stripping naked in front of each other and "hey, let's make love" would have been more realist with only a few narrative lines saying they did start dating and expanding the time between each parts to a week.
That or I'm getting too old.
In an handful of drawing, Luke seemed suddenly way scrawnier than before, and back to 'normal' half scrawny just after Nicole's shower. I don't know for the other readers, but it was enough non continuity to make me look back twice.
Finally, there was a lot of female nudity yet no male nudity at all below the waist. When (if) he grow back, If readers aren't afraid of the sight of a penis, it would be nice.
But that's only a few things I t noticed, don't get the wrong idea, the artwork was amazing, the story great and the hindsight of what will come too, I feel my money wasn't wasted at all and like many of us here I can't wait to see more.
