Thank you everyone for your comments, and really nice to see that people like it enough to comment
Thanks
What I would like to know how - if you don't mind.... tell me what you would like to see changed (if anything). I am thinking about processes, and how I did it - and doing that was challenging in time, but overall the elements were not as challenging as technically requiring. In fact - the mirror transformation, and the voluntary transformations was heaps more technically challenging.
I didn't in fact put the three process transformations in there - just to offer three different ways to do transformations. They just happened to work out that way in the story.
In fact, I had a different idea for the story mental changes, but I was limited not allowed to have children in the work (Rule of TGComics - and certainly understand it). And while the children were not involved in anything bad, because the story was going on TGComics I couldn't have it.
The idea was not about children however, it was going through the life of Nano, through each moment of importance, and giving you a version which was male, and then in the middle of the telling, he would change into female, and the memory would improve.
Now that in fact had no process - and it was very much a "flash" type change. Which was originally my plan. However, instead it came more into the voluntary transformation and snippets of the mental changes going on in his mind.
But, I have done a few processes works - and I do not really get much feedback on the process. I love process, big thing to me, but - I am certainly now becoming a interested in more complicated stories, and many of them don't fit well with process and detailed transformations.
But, if people like the process, and want to help me improve on them - I am more than willing to tweak my stories to try and keep process in there.
again hugs for the comments *hugs hugs*