[Jaran]

I like the approach to it, but the only problem I have that breaks the immersion is that the collar of the shirt is completely static, and doesn't shift around at all when she turns her head.

In a scene like that, the main focus areas are of course, the head and hands, but I found myself looking almost solely at the head, because for me (like many, I would imagine), the emotion of the shrinkee is just as important as the shrink itself.

I don't have the technological knowledge to suggest a way to improve it, but I figured I'd at least share my thoughts on where the attention is drawn, etc.