I've been putting some plot in my transformation stories for a while. Makes me happier to write them! Love me some comic-book drama for my universe of metamorphs hehe.
Speaking of which, if you liked this one and read Wonderful World (Omega's origin), I also recently wrote a mini series about the heroine of those stories, Charlie the scorpion, in a action-packed story, but I had to post it in "Everything Else" because it technically hasn't got female transformation.
If you wanna read and comment, here's the link to it:
http://www.process-productions.com/f...ad.php?t=34235