[Goldendawn]

I liked the art, but to be honest I felt a little cheated out of a good amount of money when it felt to me like a lot of flash back scenes all put together. I didn't feel the story really was a story. It would have been better in my opinion for it to be told without the flashback, and you where then left more with a wonder of what was going to happen, and it felt more like a story.

I do feel that it brushed over a lot of content, too much to be honest, and maybe it was trying very hard to do a large long transformation but the thing is I felt very much like "Um, you would have thought SOMETHING would have happened."

I loved the mental aspect of the story - and the overall feel of it - I just feel the story was ... weakened because of that flashback nature.

But overall a good read - a bit expensive... I don't see how people on a tight budget can afford, which could impact on sales (will be interesting to see if it does or not).

It is nice to see more full TG coming into the site again - missed it - since I am not into the forced fem/crossdressing stories that are being done.