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vincent_richter · 08-10-2013

I think you're going to like Chapter 3, though I did kinda lose my stream of thought after the first few paragraphs (should be obvious where, thus why I consider this a first effort).

I'll edit this post as soon as I've finished revisions.

Chapter 3

Edited with a better stopping point.

08-10-2013	#38
vincent_richter ミンナニナイショダヨ Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: St. Canard Posts: 6,091	Re: Cuddlebeams Proofreading & Content Hub! I think you're going to like Chapter 3, though I did kinda lose my stream of thought after the first few paragraphs (should be obvious where, thus why I consider this a first effort). I'll edit this post as soon as I've finished revisions. Chapter 3 Edited with a better stopping point. __________________ If you're not outraged, you're not paying attention. Last edited by vincent_richter; 08-11-2013 at 12:49 AM.