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frice2000 · 10-16-2013

While it is one of the better TG movies out there it suffers greatly from simply awful writing. Your writing is fine and even good in pure TG terms it doesn't work for a full movie. It's kind of very awkward and way too full of TG tropes to be taken seriously if you don't share this fetish. If you want to make these movies in the future and want them to have wider success then just for fans of the fetish then you really need someone else to write this stuff.

That's not to say I don't think people should give this new movie a watch. For what it is it's quite good. Just think if you had at least a non-tg fan as an editor you'd have a far far far better movie in general even if it had the same premise.

10-16-2013	#2
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: Paradox Alice While it is one of the better TG movies out there it suffers greatly from simply awful writing. Your writing is fine and even good in pure TG terms it doesn't work for a full movie. It's kind of very awkward and way too full of TG tropes to be taken seriously if you don't share this fetish. If you want to make these movies in the future and want them to have wider success then just for fans of the fetish then you really need someone else to write this stuff. That's not to say I don't think people should give this new movie a watch. For what it is it's quite good. Just think if you had at least a non-tg fan as an editor you'd have a far far far better movie in general even if it had the same premise.