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Re: Under The General's Command (Work in Progress)
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Originally Posted by Rubilax
She unconsciously the bed frame to steady herself as she tried to process the latest development in the string of changes that had been attacking her for the last dozen or so minutes.
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Ugh...I do believe there's a word missing ^^;
Also, I like how Ferris's changing personality is also re-writing her own history. It's like changing history with your mind.
I also am starting to think what media you're referencing which may have a tall shark-toothed(?) woman (even if I haven't actually seen/care for it). I won't say it here (besides someone beat me too it), so I'll send you a note with my guess.
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-Male characters I like to see TG'd: Koizumi (Haruhi), Shinji (EVA), Keitaro (Love Hina), Satoshi (DNAngel)
-Female characters I'd like to be (Update): Rei (EVA), Ami and Haruka (Sailor Moon), Nene (BGC2040), Teletha (FMP), Haruhi and Mikuru(Haruhi Suzumiya), Yourichi and Rangiku (Bleach), Riza(FMA), Lenalee (D Gray Man), Ennis (Baccano).
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