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Originally Posted by LycanDope
@catfish27 - thanks! I like to try to work in little things like that in the stuff I write so I'm glad they're not completely hidden by everything else. Was there any other bit that worked well or anything I could improve if I ever try a non-quick BE and/or bimbofication story?
@Muhznit - thank you for the feedback. Can you give me a few pointers on what works for more detail for the BE aspect? Just basically more descriptions as they grow out and such or something else?
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A few more descriptions of sizes would work. You have 5 stages of bracelet color, but only 3 stages of BE (Areolas doubling in size, DD-Cup, H-Cup). Plenty of room for more intermediate sizes. (and bigger than H-Cup IMO, but size preferences vary for everyone)