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Unread 01-04-2014   #12
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Re: Binding Contract

Read your story and it was awesome. Nicely detailed, vivid imagery, really worked out all the senses. The erotic parts were well done, pacing was nice. Only thing I might change is adding more clothes tearing due to transformation, but that's really a personal hang up of mine and I say it for just about every story I may read. hehe

Keep up the good work, and as I said before wish I had saw this earlier and read it then.
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