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RavenRift · 01-13-2014

Oh? Perhaps I can change that. What about the wording caused the confusion? I'll re-write the section to prevent someone else from getting confused. I feel like the lantern was a little forced, but I wanted a way to get Jason involved and still have everyone else oblivious.

I'l try and put a little more focus on the process in the future as well. it's something I want to do anyway, since process is what I like most. The acting and doing as a woman is great and all, but what I really enjoy in stories is the transformation itself. It's where this entire idea came from, an excuse to write shorts and link them together somehow.

Thanks for the input, it really helps a lot.

EDIT: Let me clarify. What in the transformation sequences would you like to see more detail put into? Any certain aspects I have been skipping out on?

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RavenRift TG Author Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 159	Re: 'Wet Dream' - XXX TG Fiction (Offsite) Oh? Perhaps I can change that. What about the wording caused the confusion? I'll re-write the section to prevent someone else from getting confused. I feel like the lantern was a little forced, but I wanted a way to get Jason involved and still have everyone else oblivious. I'l try and put a little more focus on the process in the future as well. it's something I want to do anyway, since process is what I like most. The acting and doing as a woman is great and all, but what I really enjoy in stories is the transformation itself. It's where this entire idea came from, an excuse to write shorts and link them together somehow. Thanks for the input, it really helps a lot. EDIT: Let me clarify. What in the transformation sequences would you like to see more detail put into? Any certain aspects I have been skipping out on? __________________ Read my XXX-Rated fictionmania contributions: http://www.fictionmania.tv/searchdis...html?word=5018 Last edited by RavenRift; 01-13-2014 at 12:50 PM.