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jsands · 02-15-2014

Not too bad!

Despite spelling and grammar issues and rushed expansion descriptions, the story held me in.

Wish you had more to tell before the epilogue bit.

02-15-2014	#15
jsands Lurker Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 22	Re: New story. A.C.E.S. Not too bad! Despite spelling and grammar issues and rushed expansion descriptions, the story held me in. Wish you had more to tell before the epilogue bit.