[Memorex75]

Thanks all for the feed back guys. My spelling and grammar defiantly leave something to be desired and i'm the first one to admit that. That said this was my first of three stories and I've been sitting on it for some time and just got it and the others out, which may explain why this one is the worst of the three. I'll defiantly work on that sentence and paragraph structure, I was just kinda learning it as i went. I'd love to hear anything more anyone has to say and please take a look at my other works. Sin City Zoo is my most recent and i'm not finished it yet, I'd love to know what people think. Anyway thanks all.
Memo.