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Unread 02-25-2014   #6
Sphore
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Re: A Family Exchange (AR TG AP)

I see what you're saying guys, and that's something that small tweaks wouldn't easily fix. It's something that's built in to the main arc of the story.

I should consider how I treat mental change and mental continuity with more consideration in my future written works- I don't think I considered the implications of this as I wrote it. I should take a step back from that dangerous line and avoid writing scenarios that involve sexual activities involving people who were (at some recent point in the story) minors or close relatives.

Do you think I should take this story down? Spoiler it and give a content warning? Or do you have other suggestions?
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