I thought it was pretty great!
I appreciate when process is a pleasant surprise to the subject (or at least a pleasurable experience), and confident succubi who exploit their process for seduction are always good for some shenannigans. The light and fun tone of it is also a plus for me.
If I had to choose something to criticize, I'd say that though your art is solid and appealing in many ways, the perspective would probably benefit from practice, particularly in the head/face area. Sometimes I notice facial features kinda squeezing into an open area that isn't obscured by hair or angle, for instance. Your expressions still totally work because they have a lot of charm and character, but that's the only thing coming to mind.
Hope you keep at it! Looking forward to more.
