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Tim333 · 04-10-2014

Nice! You use really descriptive language; it's very evocative.

I just about died for this line: "She'd outgrown her life, her job, her concerns. She had wanted this more than she wanted anything." It really brought out the emotional feeling of letting go and slipping away into ecstasy.

04-10-2014	#6
Tim333 Lurker Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 16	Re: Inches and Dreams (MiniGTS Short Story) Nice! You use really descriptive language; it's very evocative. I just about died for this line: "She'd outgrown her life, her job, her concerns. She had wanted this more than she wanted anything." It really brought out the emotional feeling of letting go and slipping away into ecstasy.