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Originally Posted by Blackbat
Just fantastic SW action. The SW interactions were great, I especially liked the Rae & Ellendra bit near the end. I guess Rae will be returning but I like Ellendra too, well drawn, great mindset along with Rae.
Without spoiling I didn't like the Sir Winkie breaking the wall bit, to be honest it felt it confused the story along with the girls reaction, like some information was missing but I know I had already seen the buildup to it.
Trying to be constructive with the feedback, I might be a bit obscure on the 2nd paragraph there but I cannot seem to get it into words. Hope I haven't spoiled it, if so will edit asap.
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Can concur with this.
It seemed a little random, almost.
I am also a big fan of Ellendra, love the purple hair, and the shrink sequence with her was great! My only really comment is that I wish each sequence had a little more individual attention.
Like, I'd sooner see 4 sequences with 5 panels each than 5 with 4, personally. Mainly because I (like others, I'll bet) favor the process, so though I do appreciate that it is there, I'll always want more focus on it.
As for this (and the next installment):
