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....What's wrong with my name? I was just going for a different flavor of Soylent Green...
Anyways, the cleaned-up versions look great, but that huge chunk of text on page 5 kind of cuts the flow from page 4. I think if you swapped the text with the panels next to it, you wouldn't break flow so much. And the cover page looks really nice compositionally. Were you planning on coloring it?
And as for the tuitorial pic, well, there's always room for cheesecake...
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