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Re: TG/BE Story: A Friendly Game
Awesome story! I'd definitely like to see more "games" in this setting - maybe Julie could find someone who'd turn the tables on her a little? It seems like Julie enjoys being the one "in control" - even though she gives the illusion of control to Mitch, she's still the one driving the scenario.
Also, a small typo / missing word: "his next comment came out in a much register."
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