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Originally Posted by catfish27
Very nicely described transformation, and I enjoy the "double the effect on him" scenario. In fact, because of that, I would have liked to have seen a clothing transformation -- either early on, or after the sex, where Julie asks Mitch what he'd like to have her wearing, and he winds up in a skimpier/sexier version of the outfit.
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Thanks. Glad you liked it. I don't really see clothing transformation fitting into this story, though. But the other story I have in mind will definitely involve clothing transformation.
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Also, does he end up with only one pointed ear at the end? I think Julie should at least leave him with a matching set.
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I actually debated how to word that last bit to imply both ears, but I just wasn't happy with how it sounded, so I decided to just leave it open to interpretation whether it affected one ear or both.
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Originally Posted by CNash
Awesome story! I'd definitely like to see more "games" in this setting - maybe Julie could find someone who'd turn the tables on her a little? It seems like Julie enjoys being the one "in control" - even though she gives the illusion of control to Mitch, she's still the one driving the scenario.
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Well she was caught a little off guard by his last wish, but otherwise yeah, she was more or less in control the whole time. I'll have to consider changing it up a bit if I ever write a sequel.
And thanks for catching the typo. Fixed it.