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Unread 06-24-2014   #17
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Re: Missa - SheHulk/muscle

Thought the clip was very good for a first attempt. As for the futa... that's a personal fetish that either you like or don't. As long as it's not the main focus of the hulk out it's ok to add a short bit at the very end as far as I'm concerned.

The thing that I found just a little off was in the first part she had heels on, and they didn't burst and her stockings could have run and ripped more, actually that goes for both parts. Especially in the second part where we see a short morph of her feet expanding, but why no green toes popping out of the stocking's fronts. With those dark stockings it would have been nice to see them run with green skin behind them as a lovely contrast.

I also would like shoe bursting, but that's just me.

As a whole thought I felt the acting was decent, and the rest of the effects good. Nice green coloring as well. Though as a note her eyes turn green or white in the comics, not red. Just a small FYI there.

I look forward to your next attempt Missa. Keep up the great clips.
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