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Originally Posted by foducool
this one was really nice, the PoV idea was a nice touch too
I'd wish you'd reread your work before submitting it or have someone else spellcheck for you, though, there were lots of spelling mistakes and you even wrote the same bubble text twice that could have been easily avoided ^^
in short, the art is top notch, but the writing could be improved
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I have to fire the person who wrotte the writting... is the second time that do the same mistake in my comics... Im sorry for that! I will find a new guy to translate for me the dialogues for next comics
And you are talking about the April O'Neil comic right??
But you enjoyed the comic? XD