[killx]

Well imo the tail should have been closer to her tail bone, and the ears had a little process, also some fear and braying at the end but thats it. No buckteeth or anything else :/

I am not sure who would be to blame, it was her first tf video and I don't know what the script looks like. Maybe we should ask her to come here to this forum to give her some creative input and what she can do to improve.