[jack36262001]

Why did I ever ignore this gem for such a long time? Such a gripping read I caught up in two days(breaks the tedium of watching bags go around a belt). Loved every chapter of it so far. It contains so many elements I love, sports teams growing together (would of been interesting to see it during a game, but hey)and the not used often enough used, growth substance in a squirt gun. I have one suggestion I'd like to make. When ending this story it would be interesting to see either the millitary or Talbot-Lucian crate up the water or the chemical to be stored and examined by "top men", but on the way across the country a crate falls off the truck in a random community. Making an opportunity for spin off stories by other authors. You could have a whole new fetish staple here like Master PC or Spells R' Us. Keep up the great writing. Maybe those that find it know what they have found, so it's not always growth by contaminated water.