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Unread 10-30-2014   #11
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Re: Sex in a Bottle (AP / AR comic)

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Originally Posted by vended View Post
I too noticed quite the lack of consistency in DreamTales works lately. :/
In Olympic Trials, for example, in which the characters age and size seem to fluctuate between each panels.

Yard Work tend to do that too.

It's really something Dreamtale should improve. When you're having a character regress, you have to keep track of it. If you portray her as being face to another character's shoulder, don't show her reaching lower then higher with each frames. Same with breast size.
Also, with loose clothing, if the clothes are loose in one pic, having it being tighter then looser look really weird. The lack of continuity is really putting the reader off the story.


Here it was nothing near as noticeable, although Mark looked like a different man as the story continued.

Otherwise, great comic. I don't regret buying it. It was really nicely done. And the twist hint for an interesting second part. ^^
Hopefully we will get to see some different storyline than what has been overdone. Maybe Mark will get a taste of that bottle too. Or those catcalling pricks. :P
Thanks, appreciate the comments on continuity. It's hard to get it perfect, but I'll try to address that as best I can in future comics.
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