Re: My first TG+SW story. With other stuff.
Seems good so far to me. There are a few things that I personally am not in to, but for what you have there it was done well. Nice, vivid descriptions that don't get too repetitive, and a well-done process (especially for your first TG.)
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Can't really draw well.
I can write when I find the time.
But mostly I'm here to leech! *thumbs up*
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