Re: Yard Work Part Eleven
I'm with you in how the new girls' art was a little simple during their early growth.
But actually, I was going to use the Ep. 10 story as a positive example of how the story can be full of process fetish fuel... I thought that episode was pretty great and I'm not usually into SW (more growth/AP/BE... although SW is always a good tension-builder for growth later).
Loved that there is an episode devoted to sexy AP, but it was too bad it was only one moment (story-wise) of process, and drawn from not the maximally-revealing/indulgent angles. Or the two sticks with semi-circles drawn on them. : )
Don't lose heart, dreamtales! Loved the investment in AP. Keep at it, all of it.
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