[iamseercoltz]

Thanks for the good words, but seriously, you're a very talented writer. I'm glad you feel the same way about rounding out the characters. With Jessica, I wasn't thinking the roommate would want to find a rabbit to bang. I'm more thinking of little things, like that she'd have the urge to put on a show and tease the protagonist, and maybe start talking in bad-girl puns without meaning too. By your response, I think you agree with this, too. It's such a fine line between a full-on, identity-death character transformation and having one's mind altered by the transformation, but you've towed that line really well in your previous stories (your Wet Dream protagonist is so interesting because he does give into becoming someone else but is still aware of his actual identity). Honestly, I was a little disappointed that everyone forgets about the transformations in Wet Dream after they're over, but I understand that it would be bad storytelling to deal with a 'he was a girl?!' situation every time he transforms.

Anyway, thanks for responding, and great job again. I'm looking forward to your next chapters with both stories!