I read it and I liked it. Nice Works as always. I hoped there would be a last regression sequence at the contest at the end, but overall a good story and good art as always.
I dont mind Betsy and Lauren. At least, it doesent matter that much whos regressing or growing, so why not stick with the well known characters?
But I fully support Janus Steels idea and hope Betsy gets a little revenge some day. Its kinda like Tom and Jerry. From time to time you feel so sorry for Tom getting beaten up always you would allow him a small victory