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Unread 07-28-2015   #4
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Thumbs up Re: Boosters 2 is now available, GTS, BE

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Originally Posted by Jaran View Post
The good:

- The art is exceptional. Love this artist and style. A+
- Aliens' dialogue remains corny, but not so ham-handed that it feels forced. Nice job.
- Solid number of actual growth sequences (3.5, last one on the blond is only 1 panel)

Could be improved:

I feel like this comic lost out a lot on not having a consistent point of reference during the growth sequences. During the first one (Kelly), there basically isn't one (other than her swimsuit) until the panel where she slips on the ship and falls onto the rest of them. The octopus itself is pretty meh as a PoR because of.... being an octopus, so to speak. The comparison there is fairly meaningless.

The second one (on Anne) has basically only the panel at the bottom of Page 15 where Dom is fucking her.

The third on Kelly, once again, is only really with the octopus. Which is a shame, because I'm looking for comparisons between the humans, not the monster, really.

The two are then the same size for some reason? I got the impression Kelly was a lot bigger after the second Booster, but then they're the same.

The big strength of Boosters1 was in the interaction. Once Anne grew, there was a huge focus on interactions between the humans, including the fantastic growth DURING sex panels.

I'm really glad Boosters got a sequel, and I would love to see another. I'd just like to see it focus more on the interaction, like the first one. GTS just for the sake of fighting the monster is ehh. They're accessories to the plot as a catalyst for the growth. They shouldn't be the focus of the interaction in my opinion. Just hope my feedback is of some use.
Glad to see this one get a sequel too, but I also agree with a lot of what Jaran said that could be improved on. It needed more human to human interaction and better how big is she comparison. Basically the parts that are in bold in the top quote, is what I agree with that needs improvement. Now this isn't to say it's bad, it's just what could be worked on if this where to get another sequel and/or other works you may do.
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