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Mr Wayne · 12-11-2015

Allow me to be the first to wish you well on this intriguing journey. Just as soon as I wrap up business I'll take a gander at these first two posts.

**Update**

Lecher,

My my! You sure are a good writer. No grammatical errors, just a couple spelling errors, no peculiar fetishes outside of what is generally accepted or expressed, very convincing and engaging writing style with bits of sarcasm and humor in well planted moments, and up to the second part a surprisingly effective build up to the pre-growth scene. Qzar9999 had done a similar job with his One Week At Wolf Lake's Kimberly Kitchen growth scene, and established a killer build up that sold that segment. Having the growth preceded by a complex, but well thought out introduction kept me hanging on when the first described growth would finally start. Not to mention I love the surprised, shocked, apprehensive, panicky alarmed reaction anytime it is well portrayed.

On top of that, I am also a fan of She-Hulk transformations where the muscularity is kept proportional but the transformations are uncontrollable. For quite some time I've imagined a story similar to Terry19d's Heather's Change, where the size wouldn't get out of hand but growths were all unpreventable and unstoppable as well as repetitive throughout the length of the story. Seeing how you intend to structure this story in a similar fashion has me eager to see the ways in which you have in mind to portray Robyn's predicament.

All in all just for the first two parts, well written, a solid back story and introduction to establish the main characters, and though I stopped when the growth began I'll check it out either later tonight or tomorrow after work. Yeah... Effective. ^_^

12-11-2015	#3
Mr Wayne The Man~the Myth~the Bat Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Gotham Posts: 738	Re: The Morning After (Growth/TF stories) Allow me to be the first to wish you well on this intriguing journey. Just as soon as I wrap up business I'll take a gander at these first two posts. Update Lecher, My my! You sure are a good writer. No grammatical errors, just a couple spelling errors, no peculiar fetishes outside of what is generally accepted or expressed, very convincing and engaging writing style with bits of sarcasm and humor in well planted moments, and up to the second part a surprisingly effective build up to the pre-growth scene. Qzar9999 had done a similar job with his One Week At Wolf Lake's Kimberly Kitchen growth scene, and established a killer build up that sold that segment. Having the growth preceded by a complex, but well thought out introduction kept me hanging on when the first described growth would finally start. Not to mention I love the surprised, shocked, apprehensive, panicky alarmed reaction anytime it is well portrayed. On top of that, I am also a fan of She-Hulk transformations where the muscularity is kept proportional but the transformations are uncontrollable. For quite some time I've imagined a story similar to Terry19d's Heather's Change, where the size wouldn't get out of hand but growths were all unpreventable and unstoppable as well as repetitive throughout the length of the story. Seeing how you intend to structure this story in a similar fashion has me eager to see the ways in which you have in mind to portray Robyn's predicament. All in all just for the first two parts, well written, a solid back story and introduction to establish the main characters, and though I stopped when the growth began I'll check it out either later tonight or tomorrow after work. Yeah... Effective. ^_^ __________________ The night is darkest just before the dawn... kArMa XD Last edited by Mr Wayne; 12-12-2015 at 01:24 AM. Reason: Oops... (again)