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Originally Posted by Beat
Just passing by to say that the last clip is sooo good, I really loved to see her trasformed feet in ruined stockings, hope to see it again in future clips!
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How long did she show the pig feet in the nylon? This was my favorite part (and the only really notable part in the other pig video (not ointment which I also bought)). I'm hesitant to buy this because pig isn't my cup of tea and I have bought all the previous TFs and were sexy ones, however hesitant because it looks too much like porn only, not enough focus on the change that happened.
Missa / the were sex is great but you should show more of the tf and slow it down and focus on the changes, like the pig feet in stockings as the focal point as she's being railed, if just a close up of a vag is kinda dull as we can just go to xnxx for that. The sex is good but try making the tf and the changes the focal point with the sex as a secondary (like her foot prosthetics should be in the frame at all times if its there... Your last Donkey she had hooves and was getting nailed but they weren't in the frame, why not?). For example if the chick you put fangs and contacts in is giving a Bj, make sure we see can both, eyes open, teeth shown, not just solely the bj... But the change that happened is evident as she gives the bj but subtle too...
More critique for the last lesbian were chick one the hottest part was the last 5 seconds after they finished the TF and growling and sniffing each other... You are better than Taylor made but I like how they show the changes after it happened for a while, I feel with ur videos it should be longer they end at the best part. Also try like a plug for a tail instead of the 2 seconds swish (check out kitten cream) again Taylor made does good tails that stay in the clip. And to the same theme the were girl in the tent, when she was rubbing her breasts show more of her teeth and fangs gnarling to see that change, it was not enough. Also let the girl explore the changes after and walk around, maybe try to hide her changes as they go on for a few days, subtle changes she tried to hide in public. The Clips usually end at the best part but if you got all the makeup and fx then why not prolong it? Okay enough said I have been meaning to critique the last 8 clips since Lana leopard which I loved. Now if she had paws for feet in the nylon and not toe claws would be amazing. Also I think for a cat tf just white fake normal long nails (some every day girls in the street have them) are sexy enough for cat claws but def need paws for feet. Okay now def done.