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Originally Posted by londox
Well at least you aren't being a total dickhead with your opinion. So far it is an extremely rough draft, I had the idea and slapped it all down. No, it hasn't been edited, as another poster way more politely suggested. Maybe let's keep the criticisms more constructive less dickish eh?
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Haven't been around long, have you?
LK can be...ah, kind of gruff. That was actually pretty even-tempered compared to some of the things he's said before. I'd advise you to try to avoid taking anything he says too personally. I should know; it's a lesson that took me a long time to learn.
That said, he does usually know what he's talking about, so if he says there's something wrong with your work, he very likely has a point.
I'm going to second scidram here and mention that the very long paragraphs were one of the main things I had in mind when I said there were formatting issues. It'll improve readability if you break them up more. I find that 3-6 sentences is a good rule of thumb, depending on sentence length.