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Unread 08-04-2016   #7
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Re: [Commission] Kate&Carol: Gypsy Curse

I like the artwork, and the setup could make for some very amusing situations. I really like the four-panel sequence on page 1. One minor criticism is that the dialogue is bit odd at times, especially in panels 2 and 3 of page 2. I get that you're not a native English speaker, so I understand, but it makes the conversation a bit tough to follow in those two panels.
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