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Unread 09-21-2016   #32
Doll-Elf
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Re: Flu Shots Part Four (Ready 9 17)

I haven't bought since the second comic because of many reasons. While I enjoy seeing multiple comics of characters interacting over the same plot, things seemed to be going too slow. The art seems to have gone down from the work from before, The writing from what I hear is worse. Mainly, I didn't buy any more because it became apparent after the second it was going to be the same boring story. "Younger is prepubescent and then becomes an 18 year old that looks like a 25 year old with a body that most kill for and always taller than even the mom. The older becomes younger and was bitchy but becomes whiny. The role reversal becomes a power play. Younger steals the older one's boy-toy as she grows up. Blonde is always the one getting older. Apparently being anything other than blonde in Dreamtale's eyes is basically being akin to an untouchable. I've also noticed that with the new art style that the brother character looks uncannily similar to the brother character of the growing shrinking family comic. But I guess that's the new style. Personally, they all look annoying, and hearing what I think they are supposed to sound like in my head is worse. The formerly younger sister needs to be taken down a peg. HARD. And for us Lesbians in the group, this whole fawning over a guy is a drag. Or worse, when the two female leads DO lesbian things, it's only while a guy watches or for the guy. Can we please get men out of the picture.
And the sisters thing. Please, please if you make another new character list, don't let them be sisters or Suzy and Marilyn. Though, as of right now, I wouldn't mind Suzy and her rival over these new batch. Preferably, Less rivals. That conflict is nearly in every comic. And if rivals, not over a man. Why not friends doing some fun exploration. OR hell, a mother and daughter bit that isn't the same as 'sex in a bottle'. What we see here is the voices of those who buy the material you make to keep funds. Customers not happy means funds will reduce. And not in the AR/shrinking way.

I don't see an easy way for the comic to make a comeback at stage 4 of it's series. Perhaps if we see other people in the background also having the same issues? Perhaps hear their comments or even a "On the other side of town, a similar story was about to unfold." Leave this family for a while, explore a new angle, perhaps a Lesbian couple finding they will have to settle to pretend to be mother and daughter for awhile and then date people their new age. Then return to the original family to: "Meanwhile, Madison seems to not be faring as well either." And do a quick recap on what happened between 'episodes'.

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