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Originally Posted by qzar9999
This has been some intriguing setup. I'm looking forward to the payoff.
I'm wondering, though. It almost seems like the protagonist has sort of become a...I think 'himbo' is the term? His equipment got bigger, he seems kinda hung up on it, his libido has ramped up, and he has trouble focusing on anything due to thoughts of sex. Y'know...essentially the male version of what happens in a bimbo TF. Was this what you're going for, or am I reading too much into it?
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I enjoy a good himbo.
To peel back the curtain a bit, making the guy himbo-ize at least somewhat helps from a narrative perspective. Ironically, writing from a more realism perspective makes it necessary to amp up other, unrealistic aspects. First and foremost, I don't care how horny a guy is, there's no way he can handle the demands of a revved up bimboslut, at least not the way I write them. It'd be exhausting. So he needs a sexual booster shot.
Second of all, himboizing the guy goes a long ways towards making him more relatable, strange as that may sound. We're going to be spending a lot of time with Trevor. If he's just a guy who turns his innocent wife into a cock-hungry slut, well, that's kind of a jerk move. Having him share in the confusion and the change makes him less of a sociopath and more a guy who just got in over his head.
I got a bunch of questions along the lines of 'why is TREVOR the one taking a pill that bimboizes his WIFE?' Because drugging your wife for sex is an asshole thing to do! Whereas taking the pill yourself is a lot more like viagra. Plus if he drugs Candace then he also has to drug any other girls he wants to bimboize, which is REALLY socially maladjusted.
So the bottom line is that I really had no choice but to give Trevor a ten inch cock.