Aha, so that porn shop story wasn't forgotten after all!
The Pleasure Shoppe, by Limerick! I love how you spend so much time little details, like a character having the name of something. It really adds grounding to your work. There's only one girl this time, though, which sucks, but makes sense given the shorter length.
I also loved the setting. Nothing--aside from the joke about millenials--really makes your works feel like they're written in different eras. There's a rhythm and humor to your writing that makes everything work within the same universe, even if they don't have anything to do with one another. Really good stuff.
Now, I'm just wondering who the hell Buck is...