Re: New Story "Take It All In" by Clovis
Going forward I'd like to establish that this story is not really free.
I am enjoying writing this, but I also want to use this as an opportunity improve my skills. To do so I need constructive criticism.
The "fee" for this story will be at least one helpful bit of feedback per chapter. I don't think this is asking too much and certainly a few of you have already done so. This last chapter has had nearly four thousand views and not one comment (close to nine thousand counting the other site I post this on which has been just as silent.) I'm not looking for praise, just something I can use to get a sense of what works and what can be improved.
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