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Abazaba · 03-24-2020

Maybe it is just my setup but the default volume is a bit loud. That said it looks fine for what is there. Then again the poser style comics is not my bag so I am not the best to judge the art/style. Might be a good idea to post your story/outline for it to see what people might say/add. Tho it seems to run well enough on my PC, but maybe a slider for the skip might also be helpful as it seems to go a bit too fast(for me at least). Also maybe a end card since it is a work in progress, and the abrupt end was a tad off putting. For a second I thought the game broke and reset. I am assuming the save functions are for a later time when there will be choices and a branching story? Possibly a unlocking art gallery for the process bits as you unlock them? Those things said it is a good start.

03-24-2020	#2
Abazaba Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2005 Location: Long Beach CA Posts: 346	Re: Working on a BE Visual Novel, would like Feedback Maybe it is just my setup but the default volume is a bit loud. That said it looks fine for what is there. Then again the poser style comics is not my bag so I am not the best to judge the art/style. Might be a good idea to post your story/outline for it to see what people might say/add. Tho it seems to run well enough on my PC, but maybe a slider for the skip might also be helpful as it seems to go a bit too fast(for me at least). Also maybe a end card since it is a work in progress, and the abrupt end was a tad off putting. For a second I thought the game broke and reset. I am assuming the save functions are for a later time when there will be choices and a branching story? Possibly a unlocking art gallery for the process bits as you unlock them? Those things said it is a good start.