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Unread 04-05-2020   #6
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Re: Working on a BE Visual Novel, would like Feedback

It's definitely a good start. A little touch up on the sound and the text alternating between capital and lowercase letters wouldn't go amiss. Really like the premise and looking forward to more.
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