[DollyBonnie]

Thanks! I really tried to capture that (and the fun elements). I am trying to show it as an empowering and liberating experience but also a “de-civilizing” one (as exemplified by their loss of modesty). Like, if you’re that small, you technically might not be human so there are no “rules” or expectations. And especially for women, that can be empowering and freeing. It’s this complex mix of a whole bunch of things.

I’m still not sure how I want to end the story. Got an outline for Chapter 2 and Chapter 3. But Chapters 4 and 5 (5 seems like a good number to end on before it gets too repetitive), got no idea other than what was alluded to that folks who played with this power don’t talk about it… if they’re even around anymore.

So I got thinking to do. But always welcome feedback from the community.